What we've got here isn't a failure to communicate, just a Metal Gear Solid fan fiction. If you haven't played The first Metal Gear Solid and at least the Tanker Chapter of Metal Gear Solid 2 (and I mean all the way to the end of the games), you should either do that or read a plot synopsis of some sort. Otherwise, you probably won't understand the story.

Without further hesitation, I present the prologue of Solid Ocelot.

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"I'm going to run a high-voltage electric current through your body. If it's just for a short time it won't kill you." Revolver Ocelot told Solid Snake as he lie there on the cold metal table, uneagerly awaiting his torture.
"Did you know it was the French who first thought of using electrical shocks as a means of torture?" He continued.
"Hey, I don't care about any of this crap." Snake replied.
"You're a tough guy, Snake, but I've got some bad news for you. You're no POW, you're a hostage. There's no Geneva Convention, so don't expect anyone to come and save you. Starting to feel a little scared?" Snake remained silent.
"Good... you should be."

"Okay, let's get started." He said as he started the torture machine. Snake tried to hide his pain as the electric current flowed through him, but couldn't help screaming out in anguish.
"How did you like that? Shall we go again?" He continued before turning the machine back on. The current was even more powerful, and Snake almost passed out from the pain.
"Had enough? Oh, we're not finished yet!" He said. Snake couldn't keep going, and let out a sigh of relief as the sweet release of death freed him from the pain.

"Alright, I think we're done here for no- oh crap, you're dead!" Ocelot said in shock.
"I can't believe you've accidentally killed two people while torturing them in less than twenty four hours! Some expert..." Liquid called out from the next room.
"Sorry, boss." Ocelot said.
"Now we'll never be able to launch the nuke." Liquid continued.
"There could be another way. We shouldn't let anyone know until we're sure." Ocelot replied.
"I suppose that would be best." Liquid said. Things got quiet for a few seconds.

"I know this probably isn't the best time to ask, but can I have one of his hands?" Ocelot said, breaking the silence.
"What?" Liquid asked.
"In case you've forgotten, I did have my hand cut off by a ninja a few hours ago." Ocelot reminded him.
"If one of the Doctors that are still here from before we took over the island will do the surgery, then fine" Liquid said.
"I'm sure at least one of them will." Ocelot replied.

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I realize the duologue in the first two paragraphs is taken from a scene in the game, (With a few artistic liberties taken, mind you.) but this prologue is mostly showing what part of the game this alternate path branches from. I'm only a beginner, so I appreciate constructive criticism. Just keep in mind I did say constructive criticism, so don't say "it sucks" for no reason just to be a dick.